Here’s a revised version of your text:
“Every time I passed the reception, there was no greeting, no warmth – it felt like walking into a cemetery. No music, no atmosphere. The rooms were small, and the bathroom fan malfunctioned repeatedly, forcing me to turn the light on and off since they were connected. There was just one bedsheet, no blanket, and I didn’t even bother asking for one. The place seemed like it was also used for public housing, and if that was the case, they should have informed us. We were woken up multiple times during the night due to unnecessary noise. Will I stay here again?
Hell no !
Random trolly on the floor left behind. Total shambles.